• Discuss your academic interest and career goals and describe your view of how Bridgewater State College can facilitate your success. - Bridgewater State University
I have always loved playing, watching, and more recently coaching sports. It is not only a hobby, but a large part of who I am. I enjoy the exercise, competition, and challenges of sports. This is why my academic interest at Bridgewater State University is Physical Education.
I have had a passion for sports ever since I can remember. I would play in the yard with my father and mother all day if they let me. It didn’t matter what sport we played, baseball, basketball, football, or soccer. I loved them all, and never wanted to stop. Even if I had to play alone, I was still having fun.
As I got older, my parents got me into a lot of sports leagues. I can remember changing uniforms in the car, going from one sporting event to another. The team setting of sports was a great thing for me. Being an only child, sports became my way of learning how to play along with people, and not just against them. It made me realize that for a team to have success, all must work together towards one common goal.
The older I got, the more I began learning how to lead, and teach teammates. I took being a leader as a challenge. I put my best effort into it. To be a great leader, you must know how to communicate to different people, and in different ways. You cannot be too hard on them. Give them encouragement and work with them at being a better player. Your job is to lead them in the right way to play, and act.
Now that I am older, I don’t have many opportunities to play in organized sports leagues. I am now finding a new found love for sports. I am coaching middle school students. I get great satisfaction from teaching young children. I can see the passion and love they have for the game, and I want to help them achieve their maximum potential. It is not just about showing them how to shoot a basketball, or hit a baseball. It is about fighting challenges. Not giving up when something is hard. Working at it and practicing until you get it. It is also about sportsmanship. Never disrespect another player or team. You can’t always win. When you do lose, you should lose like a winner.
My career goal is to become a great Physical Education teacher. I believe the best way for me to reach my goal is at Bridgewater State College. I want to teach children all the important lessons they can learn from sports. It is also important for children to know that they don’t have to play video games for fun. Playing sports and getting exercise is so important for our youth. It keeps them in shape and teaches children how to interact with one another. I want to be a part of keeping that tradition alive in our youth.
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Reviewer’s Name: Ashley Taylor
Date: 10/4/2011
Partner’s Name and Title of Paper Reviewed: Barry Rose/Application Essay
In your own words, fully and with precision, describe what the assignment is asking the writer (your partner) to do? Please use your own words rather than merely quote from the assignment.
In this assignment my partner Barry must write an essay of application to a college. The college provides a question that my partner must answer as his essay. He must answer each part of the question fully and clearly, he also must make himself standout in a positive way so as to why the college would accept him.
To what extent has your partner met the expectations of the assignment? Please pick a passage as illustration and describe what works well there. Again, try to use your own words.
I feel as though my partner Barry has met the expectations to this assignment very well. I feel Barry has done a great job answering the whole question, each and every part of what the question was asking. I feel his description in his essay really helps the reader get a clear understanding of why he loves sports are his passion. He added facts in his essay which gave him credibility. For example in the 1st paragraph the 1st and 2nd sentence “I have had a passion for sports ever since I can remember. I would play in the yard with my father and mother all day if they let me.” Another good example of his facts be personal experience of his passion for not just playing but anything to do with sports is in the 5th paragraph, 2nd and 3rd sentence “I am now finding a new found love for sports. I am coaching middle school students.”
What area needs more work? Why? Please pick a passage as illustration and describe what isn’t working.
Although my partner did answer each part of the question I feel as though his answer each part was to similar. The question says “Discuss your academic interest and career goals” I feel as though his answer to these two parts were almost the same. An example would be in the first paragraph last sentence “This is why my academic interest is physical education.” And in the last paragraph first sentence “My career goal is to become a great physical education teacher.
Please indicate TWO questions about the draft and at least ONE suggestion for ways to improve it.
Are you on a current sports league for adults now?
Are there any sports you can play at Bridgewater? If so maybe you could add this to your essay as another reason why Bridgewater is the school for you.
I feel a good way to improve this essay a little is to describe a little more why Bridgewater is for you rather than any other school. Or add that you believe they have a good teaching reputation, which would help you as a physical education teacher.
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